Wednesday, January 14, 2009

when I say nothing at all..

word count didn't matter
but
pictures spoke louder
but
actions streamed clearer
but
thoughts travelled faster
but
stillness moved farther
but.........
We need more words today....where's the mind?
The road ahead seems to be left behind.



5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dear Madam, I am sorry I could not Understand... Or is that What you are trying to convey...

Unknown said...

hey it seems u have moved forward n the thoughts r left behind.....keep posting... :)

LimboSurfer said...

yet for but would have been good. cuz the poem was a positive progression. el pardon if im wrong.Keep writing. they r small n feathery.

Vaal Thamizhan said...
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Sowmya said...

hmmmm...